This is the storyboard and script feedback sheet that James Mason has filled in for me after reading through my work, it has helpful criticisms that I can use to make my work better.
It explains how I need to edit the layout of my work because it doesn't look completely professional.
It explains how I need to title my game because at the moment I do not have a title for it.
I think I have done well with the approach of the game because he didn't know what approach it could be which shows that it is an original idea that doesn't follow a set approach.
Overall I think the criticisms are helpful and will help me to change any issues in order to get a better overall grade.
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